Thursday, 14 March 2013

Improved Storyline

There were certain aspects of our previous storyline that did not correlate with the making of the video, therefore we had to tweak certain areas in order to maintain interest from the audience and most importantly make sense as a whole.

Face shot down to necklace, necklace falls to ground, time rewinds with clock, rewind all scenes.
Music starts Wakes up on street in Dartford with cardboard box and bin bags
Walking into park touches the trees wanders round the park looking lost Walking shot of feet, walking to town(station) to beg for money
Sees money on the floor and picks it up
Meets guy in alleyway exchanges money for drugs
Gets paper out of pocket to call someone from payphone .. calls guy

Walking again but in the evening to house

Sitting on stone wall underneath street lamp

Car comes she enters Shot of car driving off
Door shot of guy and girl entering
Girl goes to bathroom freshens up takes drugs
Walks to room, see the guy taking off clothes

Bed scene crying clothes on floor
Goes to Bathroom drowns herself removes necklace

STORYBOARD

Below are images of the storyboard and storyline throughout the video.






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